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Aidan practice by 768dragon Aidan practice by 768dragon
I noticed that I hadn't drawn Aidan in a while, so I did a quick painting practice of him.
If anyone has any tips on digital painting please let me know. :)

Aidan and the art are mine.
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I am by no means an expert, and haven't much formal training, so this critique is only a few things that I noticed, but I may be entirely wrong, so take them with a grain of salt.

Overall I really like this piece. I like the colours, and the eyes are beautifully done.

The shading is good on the contours, but the contours join together at the front of the neck suggesting that the neck isn't very long, yet the arch on the back of his neck suggests that he has a long neck. I would extend the contours downwards as a suggestion of the neck muscles, and used to give the direction of the neck.

What jumps out at me straight away as being slightly odd is the angle of the head. His head seems over-bent. His chin looks like it's touching his neck, which wouldn't be a naturally comfortable pose for him. Let him hold his head up high and proud, because he's so beautiful, he deserves to :D
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skykunthedragon Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
what a cute face x3
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Odahviing Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's fantastic! I love Aiden, he's quite awesome :)
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768dragon Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thanks :) I haven't been drawing him much, I should do him more
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Odahviing Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Indeed! I love Aiden, and he's pretty awesome! I'd love to see more art of him :D
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768dragon Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:) I'll be sure to post more of him then, he's due for a bit of a redesign I think
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Odahviing Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Really? Well I'll look forward to what you do with him :D
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768dragon Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:) ok, Ima go to school now. I might not be on devart much until Wednesday
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Odahviing Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awww, alright :) Well talk to you later!
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768dragon Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:wave: bye
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dragon919 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awww! very beautiful! love it!! you did him perfectly!! i do really looove the eyes
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